FINALLY! I’ve been agonizing over this scene all week, trying to approach it from the right angle. Everything I tried sounded stupid and robotic, like I was just spewing information. And the worse part was that I really NEEDED to convey that information – in a non-robotic way. So it finally clicked, and it’s after midnight now and I have to get a few hours sleep before work, but I think my characters are having a realistic, believable, informative (but not spoon-fed) conversation that moves the story along! WOOOO!
We’ll see if I still think so tomorrow. 😉